Editing Samples
Bridget Edwards
Note: on some editing samples, the highlighted or starred edits are the ones that were accepted by the author and incorporated into the revised draft.
Freelance Editing, Immortal Works
Because the novels I have edited for Immortal Works have not yet been published, I cannot provide an editing sample until the books have been released.
Because the novels I have edited for Immortal Works have not yet been published, I cannot provide an editing sample until the books have been released.
Rocky Mountain Oils
Editing responsibilities involved reviewing blog, website, label, printed insert, and all published content for the company. I also worked with a third-party author, Christi Diamond, and edited content she wrote for the company.
Note: editing samples are linked to a Google Drive folder. See link below
Editing responsibilities involved reviewing blog, website, label, printed insert, and all published content for the company. I also worked with a third-party author, Christi Diamond, and edited content she wrote for the company.
Note: editing samples are linked to a Google Drive folder. See link below
Essential Oils for Summer
Assignment: edit the content provided to the company via a third-party author, Christi Diamond. Make sure content keeps Christi's voice but also alines with company values, product uses, etc. April 2019 https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1Yy9GQXtNCj2Vn5t3RAbN9clpBXhS6H9x?usp=sharing Essential Oils for Sleep
Assignment: edit content written by a third-party author for possible publication on the company website December 2018 https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1Yy9GQXtNCj2Vn5t3RAbN9clpBXhS6H9x?usp=sharing |
Camping With Essential Oils
Assignment: edit the content provided to the company via a third-party author, Christi Diamond. Make sure content keeps Christi's voice but also alines with company values, product uses, etc. April 2019 https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1Yy9GQXtNCj2Vn5t3RAbN9clpBXhS6H9x?usp=sharing Camping With Essential Oils
Assignment: review content for PDF "70 Ways to Use Essential Oils". Edit for grammatical errors and tone. (See both edits page and final PDF in the Google Drive folder, linked below) October 2018 https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1Yy9GQXtNCj2Vn5t3RAbN9clpBXhS6H9x?usp=sharing |
You Are The Team: 6 Simple Ways Teammates Can Go From Good to Great
By Michael G. Rogers
Amazon Best-Seller, self-published novel
*note: comments that appear on the original documents as part of Track Changes do not appear on these copies.
Assignment: Perform both copy and substantive editing throughout the manuscript, and fact check quotes while keeping the author's voice.
By Michael G. Rogers
Amazon Best-Seller, self-published novel
*note: comments that appear on the original documents as part of Track Changes do not appear on these copies.
Assignment: Perform both copy and substantive editing throughout the manuscript, and fact check quotes while keeping the author's voice.
Healthy Utah Magazine
*note: comments that appear on the original documents as part of Track Changes do not appear on these copies.
*note: comments that appear on the original documents as part of Track Changes do not appear on these copies.
Vacation Guide
Assignment: fact check the statistics and replace them with updated sources with a citation, check website or media sources listed by the author and change out-of-date ones to new apps or websites, update the recommended books, general editing, and change audience from only females to general audience. Distracted Driving
Assignment: do a basic edit on the original article; find and add a specific example of a Pokémon Go car accident. |
Anxiety in Adolescent Girls
Assignment: do a basic edit on the original article; incorporate some key facts and figures from a second article. Healthy Magazine's Fridge Guide
Assignment: basic edit |
Stance: Studies on the Family online journal
I volunteered as an editor for this student-published journal, working in two partnerships to edit two different articles for publication. For one of these groups, I was the lead editor who worked directly with the author and selected which edits would ultimately be applied to the article. These articles can be found in the Fall 2015 issue.
*The authors of these articles have given permission to share the edits made to their articles; their names have been withheld for privacy.
*note: comments that appear on the original documents as part of Track Changes do not appear on these copies.
*The authors of these articles have given permission to share the edits made to their articles; their names have been withheld for privacy.
*note: comments that appear on the original documents as part of Track Changes do not appear on these copies.
A Case for Traditional Marriage
This version contains the copyedits made in this article. Substantive edits were done first with my editing partner. For this article, I was the lead editor and decided which edits would be applied prior to publishing.
BYU Studies Quarterly, online and printed journal
*note: comments that appear on the original documents as part of Track Changes do not appear on these copies.
*note: comments that appear on the original documents as part of Track Changes do not appear on these copies.
Celestial Commentary on 1 Corinthians
This is a transcript of a lecture given for BYU's 2015 New Testament Commentary Series. It can be found here. Assignment: copyedit transcript and do a source check. Because this is a transcript, I was not asked to make any major changes to the text. |
Mark's Portrait of Jesus
This is a transcript of a lecture given for BYU's 2015 New Testament Commentary Series. Assignment: copyedit transcript and do a source check. Because this is a transcript, I was not asked to make any major changes to the text. |
BYU Magazine Blurbs
I worked with these three authors on 250 word blurbs as sample articles for BYU Magazine.
Note: on some editing samples, the highlighted or starred edits are the ones that were accepted by the author and incorporated into the revised draft.
I worked with these three authors on 250 word blurbs as sample articles for BYU Magazine.
Note: on some editing samples, the highlighted or starred edits are the ones that were accepted by the author and incorporated into the revised draft.
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Mormon Insights
I worked with these three authors on their articles for Mormon Insights. I offered basic suggestions and clarifications in the first revision before submitting to Mormon Insights for publication.
Note: on some editing samples, the highlighted or starred edits are the ones that were accepted by the author and incorporated into the revised draft.
I worked with these three authors on their articles for Mormon Insights. I offered basic suggestions and clarifications in the first revision before submitting to Mormon Insights for publication.
Note: on some editing samples, the highlighted or starred edits are the ones that were accepted by the author and incorporated into the revised draft.
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